Thursday, 31 January 2013

Feedback 2-Amy's Review

Front cover

"I agree with Megan that one of the colours for the front cover and contents page colour scheme could be brighter so that it is not to bland"

"I also feel that the main cover line could be made bigger as it is the most important thing on the page"

Contents page

"I think it would look better if there was less writing or it was made smaller because it looks very compact and like there is to much"

"I think the pictures work well especially for the prizes but i think that part of the page could be made smaller to allow space for the important things"


Double page spread

"The double page spread could have more text over the image as there is not a lot going on"

"It also could also have another colour so the overall look is more interesting, only something subtle as the other colours are extreme"

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